Falling To Pieces Intro

I decided to figure it out so other people could share in its awesomeness.  Im pretty
it is correct.  Sounds so to me.
You play it with your middle and ring fingers while holding the pick between your thumb
forefinger.       First Ending.
  x     x     x     x     x   x  |x     x   x x     x     x   x  |
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|
e|5-5-5-3-3-3-1-1-1-0-0-0-1-1-0-0|-------------------------------| 
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3| 
g|-------------------------------|5-5-5-5-5-2-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-5-5| 
d|-------------------------------|-------------------------------| 
a|-------------------------------|-------------------------------| 
E|-------------------------------|-------------------------------| 
Second Ending.                            Key + Hints
  x     x   x x     x     x   x  | x=accented note
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e| e=eighth note
e|6-6-6-6-6-3-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5| Keep your middle finger on the b-string 3--|                             
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3---------------------------------------------| on the e-string 3s use your 
g|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| for those as well.  Use the 
d|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| fingers spread out across th
a|----------------------------------------------------------------------------| fretboard to hit the correct
e|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|                             
e| 
b|m
g|r
d|e
a| 
e| 
e| 
b|i
g|e
d| 
a|n
e| 
e|   
b|ddl
g|st 
d|res
a|ote
e|   
e|         
b|e finger 
g|of your  
d|t of the 
a|s.       
e|         

I think its right.  Do you think its right?  Please rate!