Falling To Pieces Intro

I decided to figure it out so other 
people could share in its 
awesomeness.  Im pretty
it is correct.  Sounds so to me.
You play it with your middle and 
ring fingers while holding the pick 
between your thumb
forefinger.       First Ending.
  x     x     x     x     x   x  |x 
    x   x x     x     x   x  |
Continues after the ad
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|e 
e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e|
e|5-5-5-3-3-3-1-1-1-0-0-0-1-1-0-0|
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3|
g|-------------------------------|
d|-------------------------------|
a|-------------------------------|
E|-------------------------------|

e|-------------------------------| 
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3| 
g|5-5-5-5-5-2-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-5-5| 
d|-------------------------------| 
a|-------------------------------| 
E|-------------------------------| 

Second Ending.                      
      Key + Hints
  x     x   x x     x     x   x  | 
x=accented note
  e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e| 
e=eighth note
e|6-6-6-6-6-3-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5|
b|3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-
g|--------------------------------
d|--------------------------------
a|--------------------------------
e|--------------------------------

e| Keep your middle finger on the b-
b|----------------------------------
g|----------------------------------
d|----------------------------------
a|----------------------------------
e|----------------------------------

e|string 3--|                    
b|----------| on the e-string 3s 
g|----------| for those as well. 
d|----------| fingers spread out 
a|----------| fretboard to hit th
e|----------|                    

e| 
b|u
g| 
d|a
a|e
e| 

e| 
b|s
g|U
d|c
a| 
e| 

e|                     
b|e your middle finger 
g|se the rest of your  
d|ross the rest of the 
a|correct notes.       
e|                     

I think its right.  Do you think its
 right?  Please rate!