Ben Dean - Alcoholic Sweat

Ben Dean- me, and i am looking for 
feedback
Album: This is my shit so dnt try to
 say its yours!

Intro
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|----------------------| 
|--7-------------------| 
|--5-55555555-5-5~7-7--| 
|-------------3-3~5-5--| 

    {   p.m. }

Riff
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|---------------------------------
|---------------------------------
|--0--234------------4-2-------0--
|--5--------5-4-2-2------4-4~5-5--
|---------------------------------

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||---| x3 


then
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|---------------------------------
|---------------------------------
|--0--234-------4-2-0-0-0-0-0-----
|--5-----5-4-2-2----5-5~4~5-5-----
|---------------------------------

Continues after the ad

Main Chorus
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|--------------------------------
|--------------------------------
|-----4-4-4-------5-5-5------5--5
|-55--5-5--0-----------0---------
|---------------55-5-5----33--3--

||-------------------|   
||-------------------|   
||-------------------|   
||--5----5--5--5~4---|   
||-------------------|   
||3---333--3-3-------|x2 


Chorus A
|----------------------
|----------------------
|----------------------
|-7x8----------7x8-----
|-5x8-4x8-5x16-5x8-4x8-
|-----5x8-3x16-----5x8-

||--------------|   
||--------------|   
||--------------|   
||--------------|   
||5x16~4x4~5x4--|   
||3x16~2x4~3x4--|x2 


then back to main chorus
|--------------------------------
|--------------------------------
|--------------------------------
|---4-4-4------5-5-5-----5-5-5---
|-55-5-5--0----------0-----------
|------------55-5-5----33-3-3----

||--------------|   
||--------------|   
||--------------|   
||---5-5-5~4----|   
||--------------|   
||333-3-3-------|x2 


Chorus B
|----------------------
|----------------------
|----------------------
|--7x8-------------7x8-
|--5x8-7x8~5x16-7--5x8-
|------5x8~3x16~5------

||----------------|   
||----------------|   
||----------------|   
||----------------|   
||7x8~5x8~4x4~5x4-|   
||5x8~3x8~2x4~3x4-|x3 


then
|---------------------------------
|---------------------------------
|-----7-7-------------------------
|--777777----7----7---------------
|--555555-7777-7777~5-5-5-55------
|---------5555-5555~3-3-3-33------


Riff
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|---------------------------------
|---------------------------------
|--0--234-----------4-2-------0---
|--5-------5-4-2-2-----4-4~5-5----
|---------------------------------

|||    
|||    
|||    
|||    
|||    
||| x3 


then
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|-------------------------------| 
|--0--234--------4-2-0-0-0-0-0--| 
|--5------5-4-2-2----5-5~4~5-5--| 
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Email me for comments at S* PLEASE!
i would really appreciate some 
feedback! thanks